Peer review and Bellesiles’ essay

For what it’s worth, here’s what a military history professor had to say about Michael Bellesiles’ problematic recent Chronicle of Higher Ed piece about teaching military history:

I actually do teach military history, in the present, at a large R-1 university. And I didn’t believe a word of Bellesisles’ story, even before I made the connection to his earlier troubles. Here’s why:

The characters are just too perfectly drawn, and the events unfold in a predictably tragic yet meaningful way. “Ernesto” and “Javier”–they are plucky immigrants that liberal academics are bound to root for, as opposed to white meatheads named Dave and Bob. Javier joined the military to thank the nation for “giving his family refuge”–they came here for political purposes, not to take our jobs! Ernesto, a Latino, writes a paper critical of DADT, in order to cement our liberal affection for him . . . . What’s more, his research paper is “amazing,” so that all us academics, who by June are ready to stab our own eyes out after spending 9 months trying to teach disinterested students who IM right through class, will like him all the more! Because it would be totally unrealistic to imagine that a non-native speaker of English in a college history class might struggle with his work! Ernesto’s brother is serving in combat–how enobling! And how rare, especially in Iraq these days! And then he gets shot in the head by a sniper, an uncomplicated death that makes clear who was right and who was wrong, because the shooter is obviously skilled, and poor Javier couldn’t fight back because he couldn’t even see the person sniping at him! It works much better than, say, “he got killed by friendly fire while kicking down the door to a family’s house,” or, “he got electrocuted because a greedy private contractor installed faulty wiring in a FOB shower.”

It’s all so perfectly tragic! And, Javier’s condition is such that he can’t even get evacuated to Germany, which serves the narrative very conveniently, because the author needs the family to not be able to go to Javier’s bedside, something the real-life military would facilitate, so that Ernesto can remain in the story. And then Ernesto, in the course of just a few weeks, becomes a skinhead military junkie–but one who still comes to class! Yes, that is far more realistic than someone with profound depression, say, withdrawing from the university or just dropping out altogether.

It’s all just so perfect–so achingly, tragically, profoundly perfect. Just like real life!

Yes, teaching military history in a time of war IS hard, because, more often, you have students in ROTC uniforms, which is kind of the equivalent of the football team wearing their uniforms to class, using said symbol of national sacrifice to bully and silence other students in the class who are afraid of appearing that they “don’t support the troops” if they offer a critical appraisal of American foreign policy. And then there are the real veterans–the combat veterans tend to be quiet, and they smile these knowing little smiles and tell you creepy things in confidence after class, while the retired pillow-case stuffers and chairborne rangers (the vast majority of military veterans) use their “status” to bluff, bluster, and intimidate.

I don’t believe a word [o]f Bellesisles’ “story.” As Tim O’Brien tells us in “The Things They Carried,” any meaning or moral that can be teased out of a “true war story” ought to make you wary of its veracity. . . . [Bellesiles’s] piece is based solely on his own observations, so it rests on his credibility alone–-and he has none. The Chronicle should be embarrassed to have printed this drivel.

Set aside the borderline snark. And assume this guy is what he says he is (I do wish more academics would conduct their online lives under their own names; in a case like this one, which is all about truthfulness and the capacity to verify, the problems with anonymous posting are particularly evident). If you can do those two things, the comment is worth some mulling. Nice to see someone who’s not a lit professor doing some genre forensics here. As Jim Lindgren notes, the gist of this comment is to suggest that Bellesiles’ essay reads like a short story with himself as the caring, compassionate professor-hero. All of this is awfully interesting.

Lindgren–who helped expose Bellesiles’ data manipulation/fabrication in Arming America eight years ago, and is now raising concerns about the authenticity of Bellesiles’ account–prompted the Chronicle of Higher Ed to announce its intentions to fact-check Bellesiles’ story. That was several days ago. He now notes that the clock is ticking, and wonders what’s taking them so long.

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  1. Katrina says:

    The whole thing is ridiculous. I thought it was amusing when one of the initial commenters to Chronicle piece said something like “isn’t it a travesty, that such a committed professor doesn’t have a tenure-track job”…. and then a couple of people pointed out Bellesiles’ track record! The Chronicle do seem to be dragging their feet about checking the story though. In the same week in which they ran a story saying that penalties for plagiarism should be stiffer for students, I will be interested to see how they respond if the story is a fake.

    It reminds me in some ways of the Orlando Figes debacle: another scholar who had no need (beyond his own psychological impulses one assumes) posted lies online, and was busted. But Figes (as far as I can tell) still has a job. Part of the challenge faced by academia right now (especially the humanities) is defending our relevance, and in many cases justifying our funding. By publicly tolerating these kind of hijinks (when people in other industries have been just as publicly canned for things they have written on facebook and twitter), academe shoots itself in the foot once again.

  2. AYY says:

    Edge of the West has a post on this. See http://edgeofthewest.wordpress.com/2010/07/13/more-bellesiles/#comments
    According to the commenters, the student made some inaccurate statements to Bellesiles.

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